Satome Satoshi's Jutsi

Name - (Jiongu: Earth Grudge Fear)
Description - (It transforms the user's body into something similar to that of a rag-doll's, which is held together by hundreds of thick black threads. In addition to sewing up his injuries, he could use the threads to tear into a victim's body, steal their still functioning organs, and integrate them into his own body, thus extending his life.)
Chakra cost - (500)
Stamina cost - (250)
Damage - (150 Per Attack With Threads)
Rank - (S)
Effect(s) - (If in death match 400 words to Get their Heart.)

Quest: Discovering The Jutsu
You always Had a feeling you were destined to be something great. So far you have acomplished everything If not all your dreams and aspirations. But there is still this one technique you have yet to discovery within yourself. Your ace in the whole
Requirements: Jounin, 40 Post
Gains: One S-ranked Hidan Jutsu

where does it seal the heart into? what does this all do and how does it all work?

where do the tenticals get their life from?

Name - (Jiongu: Earth Grudge Fear)
Description - (It transforms the user's body into something similar to that of a rag-doll's, which is held together by hundreds of thick black threads. The threads feed off of The User's chakra and could only be cut by someone with 50% more chakra then the User. In addition to sewing up his injuries, he could use the threads to tear into a victim's body, steal their still functioning organs, and integrate them into his own body, The hearts are then sowed into the threads and then a mask is created from Chakra. The user then Gains the natural element of the heart and can use it freely. If the user runs out of Chakra the extra hearts stop and can't be used until Chakra regains. These Thread do no physical damage.)
Chakra cost - (500)
Stamina cost - (250)
Damage - ()
Rank - (S)
Effect(s) - (If in death match 400 words to Get their Heart. Gain the Element of the Heart. Can Fix Mild Injuries.)
Requirements - Medical Ninja, Jounin Taught By Satoshi

the heart is useless once chakra runs out as any other heart would except you will live still.

To gain the heart you have to type up the 400 words while amidst the DM and it HAS to be about how your stealing it from the other person, if they counter act the move then it fails, alas you have to start over

Name - (Jiongu: Earth Grudge Fear)
Description - (It transforms the user's body into something similar to that of a rag-doll's, which is held together by hundreds of thick black threads. The threads feed off of The User's chakra and could only be cut by someone with 50% more chakra then the User. In addition to sewing up his injuries, he could use the threads to tear into a victim's body, steal their still functioning organs, and integrate them into his own body, The hearts are then sowed into the threads and then a mask is created from Chakra. The user then Gains the natural element of the heart and can use it freely. If the user runs out of Chakra the extra hearts stop and can't be used until Chakra regains. These Thread do no physical damage.)
Chakra cost - (500) {250 Chakra Upkeep}
Stamina cost - (250) {125 Upkeep}
Damage - (75 per attack)
Rank - (S)
Effect(s) - (If in death match 400 words to Get their Heart.Must be in death match. Can be stopped if counter-acted. After that must start over. Gain the natural Element of the Heart.{Can only use elements while in full form} Can Fix Mild Injuries.)
Requirements - Medical Ninja, Jounin Taught By Satoshi

Name - (Phoenix Mindset)
Description - (The user begans to concentrate his chakra into the finest degree. From his back six black wing will emerge. The User's eyes will become pure grey and hair will fade grey. The user will now begin to use black flames when ever he has fire jutsu.)
Chakra cost - (500)
Stamina cost - (250)
Damage - (0)
Rank - (S)
Effect(s) - (+15% Evasion +150 Damge to Fire Jutsu)

first off fix the typo lol.

and change the dmg to +15%
evasion +15%

but whats the down cost to this?

any side costs for this?

Name - (SuperNova)
Description - (This technique Involves a Massive amount of chakra and the Lava Release. Satoshi will first concentrate his chakra into the ground and raise up several Volcanoes that form a Pentagon. Satoshi will then rise into the air in the center of the volcanoes. After Performing the Necissary Hand seals the volcanoes will began to erupt black lava.)
Chakra cost - (... Idk)
Stamina cost - (... Idk)
Damage - (200)
Rank - (S)
Effect(s) - (Fourth Degree Burns -10% Health Each Turn)

Name - (Phoenix Mindset)
Description - (The user begans to concentrate his chakra into the finest degree. From his back six black wing will emerge. The User's eyes will become pure grey and hair will fade grey. The user will now begin to use black flames when ever he has fire jutsu.)
Chakra cost - (450)
Stamina cost - (225)
Damage - (0)
Rank - (B)
Effect(s) - (+15% Evasion +15% Damge to Fire Jutsu / Fire Jutsu Cost + 20%)

Phoenix mindset approved after you add a +50 chakra upkeep.

Well think up a chakra cost and then fill in the stamina drain, I'd say maybe 250/125?

i think 250/125 sounds about right.